This was so bad, I can't even fully comprehend how can it have the rating it has. I'm stupefied.
This was like a bad fanfiction story, in fact I've read at least five different fanfiction that were so alike this story, that reading this was just painful. And very Twilight? I don't know if this was Twilight fanfiction before getting published, but it could be.
And this author needs to get a better editor, I don't know what I'm going to do if I read "I could care less" one more time. *groan*